Snippet Sunday
WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS
Sunday weekend writing warriors post 8 lines of something they are writing, something they are editing, or something that is already unleashed on the public. The snippets are fun to read and a great way to discover new and exciting authors. Reading as many snippets as I can has become a Sunday routine .
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Chocolate Couture
Lily and Noah discover a secret compartment in the vacant store between her pastry shop and his soon to open restaurant. A hidden letter could hold the secret to the success of each of their businesses.
Sunday Snippet
“Don’t worry about me.” Noah shrugged. “I’m just a burger jock. I have no interest in secret compartments.”She narrowed her eyes and looked up at him. “Be warned, I’ve got an arsenal of recipes that will increase my sales beyond your imagination.”
“You have no idea what I’m imaging right now.” His confident smile and sexy voice soaked into her like her apricot rum sauce soaking into dry sponge cake.
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Interesting simile. Great for the foodie.
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Oh wow--I get hungry every time I read one of your snippets, Zelda! Very fluid writing. Nicely done :-)
ReplyDeleteoooohhhh.... what is he imagining right now???? between sexy and chocolate, I'm drooling here! ;-)
ReplyDeleteZelda, I love your writing style. Yum. Imagination thrumming in my little head. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteOoh, now I'm hungry and intrigued! I love the two characters and the premise already. Terrific snippet!
ReplyDeleteWell, *I* have an interest in secret compartments! I'm dying to know what's in the letter.
ReplyDeleteThat's not fair! I haven's been ablle to eat for a week.
ReplyDeleteThe last line is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteGood stuff... I love that last line.
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptions. Love the light banter cant wait for next week!
ReplyDeletePrickly versus seductive! That's one of my favorite dynamics :)
ReplyDeleteAnd your descriptions of Noah and the food---yum!
Why do I have the feeling that he is definitely not talking about cakes?
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